Haiku on Autumn
Titaxy has inspired me to give Haiku a go :-)
(She has also inspired me to try 55words fiction but I am like a brick wall in it :/ )
Anyway it turns out that I had so much fun, I wrote four!
Thanks Titaxy for introducing this fun way of learning to do something new :-)
Because it's autumn here, all the four are on autumn
Cold wind hugs me tight
Ruffles up the autumn leaves.
Am oh so lonely!
Roads have a mat with
Lifeless leaves of autumn fall,
No flowers at all
The tree stands naked
Lost everything to the fall.
Yet stands proud and tall.
Oh where will it hide
Little bird on the bare tree?
Cruel are you fall!
So what do you think???
awesome awesome awesome...i love it..each one of those...lovely, divz...keep them coming :-)
Nice.. :)
Now give us more
awesomeeeee.... yaar... ur too good... i'm proud ot be ur frd hugzzzz
haiku n all .. Wow.. I'm sorry i missed out on ur earlier posts ..damn my boss ... Read each one of them...buti'm commenting here..
Loves ur haiku and ur poem. Completely superb girl. And i'm sorry to hear about ur fish :(
@Titaxy - :-D thanks doll
@comfortablynam - :) thanks, ll try to...
@Dido - haaaye thanks babez :-D
@Aanya - I thought stupid cupid kept you busy :-)
m glad you are back
and thanks :-)